That was well animated.
Much better than the second one you made
Still not great, everythings too slow and the jokes are just forced, stolen and generic.
You need a script writer.
Wow. I guess you CAN be constructive in your reviews. I do see the slow pacing. That's one thing I'm trying to fix in this next one. What I don't see are these stolen/generic jokes you're referring to.
(Are you talking about the "Bikini Inspector" bit? I guess that'd be one, but you say "jokes," as in plural. Where's another? Seriously. I want to know. PM me.)
I've learned a lot more about animation since 2A's completion, so watch the next one and see if it's any better.
Oh god that was poor.
I think you should know before I insult your talentless entry, that you are the only reason I signed on to newgrounds. I felt compelled to tell yankee idiots like you that you have no talent, sense of humour or understanding of social/interactive communication to such an extent that you created this abomination.
I genuinly felt I was being generous by granting you 1 on the graphics, but then I realised you were actually contemplating writing a sequel to this filth. Could you please spare me throwing up (because that's how bad it was) and not bother.
All in all:
You can draw okay, but help me god your narrow minded naive and unstructured script is nothing short of dire, not to mention a terrible attempt at being funny and sound that may as well have not been there. I stopped this half way through, and though I don't mind people laughing at the british at all I actually considered boycotting your existance.
You didn't offend me by insulting my culture, the fact you created something so horribly put together just made me want to die.
You know, all you did was waste the time you could've spent writing comedy, cause God knows that you are funny as hell (no sarcasm implied) but instead of making animation yourself, you decide to criticise someone else's... to the point of protesting their very existence. That's interesting.
Just so you know, I only put in the stereotypical view of the English in here to show just how stupid it really is. You say I'm stereotypical and/or racist (that IS what you're implying here) even though you say that "yankee idiots" are all "talentless" and lacking in a "sense of humor" and "understanding of social/interactive communication." Don't you think THAT'S a little racist? Isn't this the EXACT SAME THING you're accusing me of? Why don't you make an animation yourself and get back to me, OK? And tell all your friends that you are making it to prove yourself to a "yankee."
I actually thought the British were understanding, witty, charming and able to laugh at themselves once in a while. I guess I was horribly wrong.
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